I am desperate for some input on this see

my letter

Thanks again
Charly

I need Input quick as i want to send her this letter if anyone wants to comment please post <img border="0" title="" alt="[Confused]" src="images/icons/confused.gif" />

Charly,

Your writing is outstanding. I'm not going to offer advice on plan b topics because I'm such a rookie but I read the entire letter and it was very positive, supportive and communicated your feelings extremely well.

The first sentence seemed a little out of character for the letter's seriousness but that may be because I don't understand the references.

I am no expert on syntax but you might want to re word the following sentance, maybe add a comma so it doesn't say "It is you I hate".

"I have realized recently what is important to me and it is you I hate not knowing how you are if your happy or sad, I hope you realize that I would do anything for you as you mean the world to me."

I felt the following sentence was referring to her recent contact with OM and if so, might be to blame oriented.

" Unfortunately, I find now that is slowly being shattered as well."

Re-read the following sentence to make sure you want to use the grammer and syntax (relies vs. realize). Do you think using the reference to fog is a good idea? I'm not sure.

"I know you are probably still in a fog and I hope you will relies one day that I was not all bad an we did have a great life together."

I will be thinking about you and your situation and hoping you stay healthy.