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To my beloved - things I wish I had said to you
#1142361 06/01/04 06:08 PM
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You will find no love
greater or truer than mine
this side of heaven
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#1142362 06/02/04 08:33 AM
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I hope you don't mind but I just plagerized you and did say it to mine. We'll see what happens. I bet nothing.
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#1142363 06/02/04 10:00 AM
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good thing I copyrighted <img border="0" title="" alt="[Wink]" src="images/icons/wink.gif" />

you can send your check to... <img border="0" title="" alt="[Razz]" src="images/icons/tongue.gif" />
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#1142364 06/02/04 10:12 AM
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That is beautiful. I'll work it into next Hallmark card.
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#1142365 06/02/04 11:08 AM
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I didn't realize until after I wrote it, but I think it's a proper Haiku. Anyone know?

I was hoping, when I started the thread, that other might leave their own words, not just crib mine <img border="0" title="" alt="[Razz]" src="images/icons/tongue.gif" /> I guess most have had a chance to say their words to their spouses.

<small>[ June 02, 2004, 11:12 AM: Message edited by: cellophane ]</small>
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#1142366 06/03/04 12:55 AM
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From many years ago....

Outside this room
sails the silver moon
on a blue ocean past.
Orange flame in a glass.
Dark shadows slowly fade.
You lie next to me there
in silky auburn hair.
How blessed am I this day?
Only you make me feel this way.
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#1142367 06/02/04 01:55 PM
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Isn't there a poetry forum.

Yes, its a haiku
very astute, now move to
the poem forum

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#1142368 06/02/04 02:03 PM
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It wasn't meant to be a poetry thread <img border="0" title="" alt="[Razz]" src="images/icons/tongue.gif" />

Only what it said in the title, things that weren't said, mine just happened to be a haiku.

I could say those words to xWW now, but it would just be wasted breath.

Maybe some day.

<small>[ June 02, 2004, 08:18 PM: Message edited by: cellophane ]</small>
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#1142369 06/02/04 02:44 PM
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cell,

just playing. I do know where you are coming from though. I got pages of stuff like that. Don't get too caught up in what you should have said.

Dude, maybe someday she'll just know it.

God Bless

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