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If I asked you to.....<BR>would you hold me when I cry?<BR>would you whisper words of comfort against my hair?<P>If I asked you to.....<BR>would you hold my hand when I am scared?<BR>would you whisper words of courage in my ear?<P>If I asked you to......<BR>would you tell me happy stories when I am sad?<BR>would you whisper words of encouragement against against my cheek?<P>If I asked you to.....<BR>would you smile with me when I am happy?<BR>would you whisper words of joy in my ears?<P>If I asked you to.....<BR>would you dance with me when I am old?<BR>would you whisper words of love against my hair?<P>If I asked you to.....<BR>would you be my salvation when I die?<BR>would you whisper words of welcome to my soul?
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Butterfly,<P>I loved it. Thanks for sharing it with me. As soon as it is safe to give my husband a card or some other form of written show of love I will share it with him.<P>Again, Thanks. ![[Linked Image from marriagebuilders.com]](http://www.marriagebuilders.com/forum/images/icons/smile.gif) <P>------------------<BR>God bless you and all of us.<P>Samantha<BR>
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Samantha,<BR>Thanks, it's still a work in progress.... I think? maybe? I'm not sure.<BR>I'll post the "final" draft when/if I finish it.<BR>B
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Butterfly,<P>You are most welcome. I will be looking forward to the final results. If/when it is finished. <P><P>------------------<BR>God bless you and all of us.<P>Samantha<BR>
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Butterfly,<BR>That was beautiful. i am getting married in a few weeks and you poem expresses many of my feelings about the man I am going to marry.<BR>LM
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Beautiful. Deep. Touched my heart. Thank you.
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