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#334325 06/15/01 06:17 PM
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Never ending Dream<P>I lay with trembling lips and hands<BR>Tiny shivers escape from my soul<BR> It has been touched and tweaked<BR> My hand touches my cheek<BR>It is warm from the dream of you.<P>I do not want to sleep or kiss the<BR>Dawn’s gentle brow, for I fear<BR> Reality may consume<BR> What may be unspoken doom<BR>If I wait for the sun to shine.<P>Bittersweet tastes mingle on my lips<BR>With words you have spoke<BR> I know what cannot be<BR>Yet I still dream, of me<BR>Flapping my wings out into the night.<P>I will awake to gently sip this<BR>Never ending dream, drunk on images<BR> My mind is lost to your universe<BR>But my soul has been cursed<BR>To breathe stale air<BR> Until I learn to inhale<P>And my heart learns not to be frail<BR>-----------------------------------------------<BR>Carefully, I slip into you<BR>Only to realize I do not fit.<BR>For years, I flapped like a fish<BR>On dry land, belly up but<BR>You did not notice.<BR>For you were always too far away to notice<BR>I was gasping for air<BR>And dying for you.<P>-------------------------------------<BR>all poems copyrighted and written by me [Linked Image from marriagebuilders.com]<BR>

#334326 06/19/01 06:02 PM
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Wow!<P>Nothing else for me to say, but wow!

#334327 06/27/01 02:31 PM
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You are so amazing, Carina Dream. Such courage to bare your soul. As a kindred spirit in writing, I see a very lovable person deserving of the best life can give. <P>Keep going with that incredible talent of yours. Thank you for posting this.<P>------------------<BR>Fresh Start

#334328 06/27/01 06:22 PM
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Freash start-you have been so kind! Thanks [Linked Image from marriagebuilders.com]<BR>I was reading through your poetry you have posted here-how long have you been writing? I really enjoy the smashing, shattering glass one (can't remember the title! OOPS!) <BR>but, I think this is so great! I write most of my stuff out of emotions that are so intense the only place they have is in poetry. <BR>Although, I can write a good satiric poem, too. [Linked Image from marriagebuilders.com]<P>hope to talk soon<BR>carina

#334329 06/27/01 06:24 PM
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Oh my, are you really a pastor [Linked Image from marriagebuilders.com] Wow, I never imagined..a pastor-on MB...I think I am finally speechless! [Linked Image from marriagebuilders.com]<BR>THank you for reading my poems!<BR>


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