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Started writing this song a while back but can't seem to find the words to finish it. Oh well, maybe someday. Here's what I have so far...
If I could find the words to make you stay forever I would say those words to you time and again If I could give a prayer and keep our hearts together I would speak this prayer until my life would end See, every moment with out you Another dream not coming true And all that I can see is that your not with me Yet there's nothing I can do
But you are the reason for the song that I'm singing You are the reason for this joy that I'm bringing When nothing in this world can ever compare Just call on me I'll be there
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</font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Arial">Originally posted by roman77: <strong>Started writing this song a while back but can't seem to find the words to finish it. Oh well, maybe someday. Here's what I have so far...
If I could find one word to make you stay forever I would say a thousand more to keep you mine I could give a prayer and keep our hearts together If it will promise that you'd come back and be mine
Every moment I have without you, just Another dream not coming true My heart is breaking again and again And there's nothing I can do
you are the reason for the song that I'm singing You are the reason for this joy that I'm bringing When nothing in this world can ever compare
Just call on me
I'll be there I'll be there...
When you came to me last December Said you were leaving town I tried to close my eyes and cast away Any rainy clouds But the rain kept pouring harder As your tears kept coming down And then our lives changed forever When you tore our world down We still can be together I still believe in you Can you hear me, darling? My heart is calling for you...
Every moment I have without you, Just another dream not coming true my heart is aching, it is dying I need you )drawn out-
With upbeat tempo- repeat chorus. I am acutally singing this song with Rod Stewart in my mind and a twangy, yet positive beat. IF only you could hear it...lol
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Carina!!!
I love what you added. It got me thinking about this piece again and I finished it with my own feelings, but I *love* what you did! I'll post another unfinished and maybe inspiration will strike you again <img border="0" title="" alt="[Smile]" src="images/icons/smile.gif" /> Here's my finished version of this song
If I could find one word to make you stay forever I would say a thousand more to know you're mine If I could give a prayer and keep our hearts together I would say that prayer until the end of time If I could reach a star and know my wish was granted I would wish on every single star I see If I could find a charm that left your mind enchanted Just to know each day you're coming home to me
See, every moment without you Another dream not coming true Still every single day, with ever word I say My every thought begins with you
For you are the reason for this song that I'm singing You are the reason for this joy that I'm bringing When nothing in this world can ever compare Just call on me
I'll be there I'll be there...
Did you ever think that you would leave me standing Alone with open arms yet no one to embrace Did you ever think the pressure's too demanding Was the time to heal too much for you to face Did you ever think that you would find another As you watched your love me just slowly die Did you ever think that we could lose each other And know for what it's worth, we wouldn't even try
But when I see you standing there The stunning smile that you wear All of my shattered dreams, all of the moonlit beams Serve to remind me why I care
For you are the reason for this song that I'm singing You are the reason for this joy that I'm bringing When nothing in this world can ever compare Just call on me I'll be there I'll be there
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I think you both should get into the music business. Hey, you have a customer in me.
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