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#334635 07/18/02 08:39 AM
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Started writing this song a while back but can't seem to find the words to finish it. Oh well, maybe someday. Here's what I have so far...

If I could find the words to make you stay forever
I would say those words to you time and again
If I could give a prayer and keep our hearts together
I would speak this prayer until my life would end
See, every moment with out you
Another dream not coming true
And all that I can see is that your not with me
Yet there's nothing I can do

But you are the reason for the song that I'm singing
You are the reason for this joy that I'm bringing
When nothing in this world can ever compare
Just call on me
I'll be there

#334636 07/24/02 11:37 PM
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</font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Arial">Originally posted by roman77:
<strong>Started writing this song a while back but can't seem to find the words to finish it. Oh well, maybe someday. Here's what I have so far...

If I could find one word to make you stay forever
I would say a thousand more to keep you mine
I could give a prayer and keep our hearts together
If it will promise that you'd come back and be mine

Every moment I have without you, just
Another dream not coming true
My heart is breaking again and again
And there's nothing I can do

you are the reason
for the song that I'm singing
You are the reason
for this joy that I'm bringing
When nothing in this world can ever compare

Just call on me

I'll be there
I'll be there...

When you came to me last December
Said you were leaving town
I tried to close my eyes and cast away
Any rainy clouds
But the rain kept pouring harder
As your tears kept coming down
And then our lives changed forever
When you tore our world down
We still can be together
I still believe in you
Can you hear me, darling?
My heart is calling for you...

Every moment I have without you,
Just another dream not coming true
my heart is aching, it is dying
I need you )drawn out-

With upbeat tempo-
repeat chorus.
I am acutally singing this song with Rod Stewart in my mind and a twangy, yet positive beat. IF only you could hear it...lol

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#334637 07/29/02 10:42 AM
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Carina!!!

I love what you added. It got me thinking about this piece again and I finished it with my own feelings, but I *love* what you did! I'll post another unfinished and maybe inspiration will strike you again <img border="0" title="" alt="[Smile]" src="images/icons/smile.gif" />
Here's my finished version of this song

If I could find one word to make you stay forever
I would say a thousand more to know you're mine
If I could give a prayer and keep our hearts together
I would say that prayer until the end of time
If I could reach a star and know my wish was granted
I would wish on every single star I see
If I could find a charm that left your mind enchanted
Just to know each day you're coming home to me

See, every moment without you
Another dream not coming true
Still every single day, with ever word I say
My every thought begins with you

For you are the reason for this song that I'm singing
You are the reason for this joy that I'm bringing
When nothing in this world can ever compare
Just call on me

I'll be there
I'll be there...

Did you ever think that you would leave me standing
Alone with open arms yet no one to embrace
Did you ever think the pressure's too demanding
Was the time to heal too much for you to face
Did you ever think that you would find another
As you watched your love me just slowly die
Did you ever think that we could lose each other
And know for what it's worth, we wouldn't even try

But when I see you standing there
The stunning smile that you wear
All of my shattered dreams, all of the moonlit beams
Serve to remind me why I care

For you are the reason for this song that I'm singing
You are the reason for this joy that I'm bringing
When nothing in this world can ever compare
Just call on me

I'll be there
I'll be there

#334638 07/29/02 03:11 PM
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I think you both should get into the music business. Hey, you have a customer in me.


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