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You walk with me
but you do not speak
You hold my hand
but I can't feel your touch
You can read my mind
but you dare not discuss it
You know my heart
but you can't share yours
You see what I see around me
but yours is a different world
You know I love you
but I can not tell you
Do not worry
Maybe I don't know exactly where you are
but I feel you inside my being
and you are so close
You walk with me.
<small>[ October 08, 2002, 08:57 AM: Message edited by: Dawnn ]</small>
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a change...
You walk with me
but your movements are silent
Our bodies must reach
but I don't feel your touch
You know my mind's wandering
but you can not speak to it
You know my heart
and you try to will yours to reach me
You see what I see around me
but life for you is a separate place
You feel my love for you
because it breaks through to your heart
Distracted thought
Voices call me back to this reality
I don't know your world
but I feel you inside each breath
and you are not far from me
You walk with me
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I *love* it. This is a great piece. I hate that we ever have to feel the emotions that lead to these words, but this poem certainly expresses those feelings.
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thanks Roman, I have enjoyed yours as well! I either come here to read about once a day - hoping for a new one from someone - or to get rid of my own thoughts. I am not a poet that is for sure - but it is nice to have a place to spill out feelings when it seems like there is nowhere to go with them. Thanks for the comment. <img border="0" title="" alt="[Smile]" src="images/icons/smile.gif" />
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Dawn,
I am also glad to find this area to try and place the words dancing around in my mind. Too many nights the words formed in rhyme only to fall through the sands of slumber. I hope to capture them know to share as I am unable to with my love. With verse I shall express that I should of when the pain which now fills what is missing with her absence.
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