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The Lullaby
Every night before bed Her mother would sing Sing the sweet lullaby of words known often The girl felt love like no other could know The thought of alone would never come
There was laughter and fun Fireworks and Christmas Joy Free spirit frolicking throught the wind blown grass Her family surrounding her Life was a blast
Then one day the girl grew up All the fun and love and laughter seemed to go away The parents started fighting The lullaby was dulled All alone the girl would cry Sit in the darkness And fear the sunrise
On one fine morning it was all over Their hearts were parted The fighting stopped and the mother went away No longer would the lullaby play So the girl found a new Happiness moved on But still kept the soft sound in her head Of that beautiful lullaby song
This was written by my daughter for a school project. One of the many things that still gets to me. I will post some more on other threads.
David A
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Thanks for sharing that.
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That is so beautiful and painful at the same time.
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This just really touched me. Your daughter captured the feelings so well. She is truly talented.
Take care and God bless! K
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It nade me remember so vividly how I felt when my parents divorced. I was a 13 year old teenager and it disrupted and changed my whole world in a negative way. your daughter is veryy talented.
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What a great poem! And I mean great as in the way she expressed herself. I'm sorry she was able to write such a thing. I have poetry from my daughter too but unfortunately it's VERY dark and sad <small>[ March 01, 2005, 01:18 PM: Message edited by: Enchantedlady ]</small>
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