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You Say You Love Me<P>You say you love me, then you just leave<BR>After this many years, what am I to believe?<BR>Our love was strong, our future was bright<BR>I still can’t believe, you didn’t even fight.<P>You say you love me, but you will not stay<BR>If I did nothing wrong, why do you hurt me this way?<BR>We were best friends, we were never apart<BR>What happened to the woman I love, what happened to your heart?<P>You say you love me, yet you won’t say why<BR>You showed no emotion, you didn’t even cry.<BR>We didn’t really talk, we really didn’t fight<BR>You acted as a coward, you hid in plain sight.<P>You say you love me, but those feelings were not real<BR>If you weren’t in love, what did you feel?<BR>We were good together, remained friends through it all<BR>And now that you’re gone, you don’t even call.<P>You say you love me, but you could not explain<BR>You left me in tears, you left me in pain.<BR>I thought we were in love, we started a life<BR>I was a happy man, with you as my wife.<P>You say you love me, together we would grow old<BR>You say you love me, or so I was told.<BR>
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OMG......this is a great prose! BEAUTIFUL work....thank you for sharing your heart.<P>------------------<BR>Time heals all wounds as long as you DON'T pick at them!
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GL,<P>Thank you for your kind words. I wrote this poem back in March when I just needed to get some things out of my head. I have a few others which I may post as well, but this was my first.<P>JH93
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Jayhawk, please do post your other poems. You have a gift that will not only be therapeutic for you but such a help to others here. <P>Poetry is such an awesome way to vent or rejoice or ponder. You bring comfort or heartful emotions that others can relate to. <P>Yes, we want to hear more from you. I hope things are improving somehow for you.<P>------------------<BR>Fresh Start
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Jayhawk,<P>From another Kansas man, that was beautiful. I probably have a poem just about exactly the same. Take care of yourself and thanks for sharing.<P>Bill<P>------------------<BR>-There are none so blind as those who refuse to see!-<BR>-Stand up and do the right thing, even if your standing alone.-
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